Untitled Melodrama 01

So, for fun, here are some excerpts from the screenplay I wrote for no reason at all. It currently clocks in at 36 pages.

Originally, I had titled it while a work in progress as "Untitled Melodrama 01" but this completed first draft, dated June 26, 2008* is titled "Backyards."

It includes some uncomfortable homoeroticism:


My love of squash:


And an obligatory Jurassic Park reference:


*But why is this dated after your previous post where you said you had finished it, you ask. Because, that's why.